Improvements

I printed my magazine out to see how it looks and to determine any errors that still need improving. Before moderation me and my peers made improvements on post it notes to find ways of developing the magazine further and find out others opinions on my magazine that is targeted to their age group.
They said i need to take time to line up all of the columns and text to ensure there was a clean finish, and ensure all of the writing is clear to make my magazine looks organised. They further commented on the magazine needing to not be so close to the page edge. This is because when i first printed it out a whole side of both my double page spread and my contents page were cut off therefore the page numbers were not visible. I made all of the above improvements to my magazine, in particular on in design by adding the grids to ensure it was all accurately placed.